Thursday, August 30, 2012

Umm.. short story thingie

So be witness to the first short story I've ever written. No idea why but I just had the sudden urge to do it so yeah, here it is! Have fun.
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            “They’re as quiet as a turkey on thanks giving.” Erik grumbled as he picked up a luke-warm energy drink from his small stash and popped it open, taking a couple large gulps then motioned the can to his friend. Both were lying stomach down under some heavy brush. “Want some?”
Aiden pulled his gaze away from the woods just long enough to give his friend a sidelong brow-raise before settling back into his position, the leaves breaking under him as he moved ever so slightly.  
            Erik shrugged. “Just thinkin’ someday you might get wise.”
“Because drinking something that tastes like fuzzed up and sugared down deer pee is what all the smart people are doing these days.”
“And you wonder why you don’t have a girl.”
Aiden rolled his eyes. “Oh I know why I don’t have a girl. Because it comes down to girls or gas and I’m choosing the one I only need to fill up once every couple of weeks.”
“Can you kiss gas?” Erik asked smugly.
“No but you can kiss my-“
“I see them!” Erik hissed, putting his can aside and grabbing his scope, bringing it up to his eye.
“How many?” Aiden whispered, his tone all business as he wrapped his fingers around the stock of his LSG.
“Three.”
“Only three? Where’s the rest?”
“No idea. But from the looks of it they don’t know where we are. You have a visual?”
“Yeah. Let me find ‘em in the glass.” He dropped his eye to his scope and a moment later he had one of the group in his crosshairs. The small band was moving in short bursts, ducking behind cover so as not to be an easy target. It was obvious they knew Aiden’s general direction but he could tell that they hadn’t pin pointed him yet. Where the other two were he had no idea. He needed to work fast.
“Ready?” Erik said. Aiden could hear the adrenaline in his voice.
“Keep your pants on man. You know I know what I’m doing.”
“Yea, yea. Just do it already. My finger’s starting to twitch.”
            “If you didn’t drink the deer pee-“
            “Oh just shut up and do it!”
Aiden grinned then took a deep breath and focused his sights on the leader of the group. He waited. Right now his targets were hidden behind a fallen redwood, probably getting ready for another dash. But to where?
“They’re about to run. Where?”
Eric looked scanned the possible locations for a moment before saying with confidence, “Tall grass, thirty yards to their right. Once they get there we’ll loose ‘em.”
Aiden kept silent. He had complete faith in Erik’s ability as a spotter, they both knew that. Now it was up to him.
            Two inches – no, better make it three for reaction time. No wind. Hundred and fifty yards away. Adjust a little bit more up and…perfect.
Then, like a scared bunch of rabbits, the pray darted from behind the tree and Aiden pulled the trigger, slammed the bolt back then forward, hardly readjusting his aim before the second round was off. Pull up, cock back, slam forward and lock into place. Small readjustment. Pull the trigger.
Three .3 mm bb’s flew from his barrel, striking his targets dead on as they yelped and jumped from the quick stings. Three hands went up, three heads went down and Erik laughed, his voice echoing in the forest.
“That was just sad.”
Aiden grinned. “Not to shabby if I do say so myself. But where are the other tw-“
Like a pair of screaming banshee the last two came screaming from Aiden’s flank, spraying orange and yellow BB’s into the bush without remorse.
Maybe it was the rush of adrenaline or just the energy drinks but Erik moved like a devil, his M4 seeming to materialize in his hands, his body moving in perfect unison as he pulled the trigger and his gun hissed plastic death. An instant later the two would-be ambushers were staring at Erik with a kind of awed look in their eyes.
“This isn’t a game for you guys is it?”
“No.” Erik and Aiden said together.  

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Random Fact of The Day: Did you know I can wiggle my ears? It's true! Yes. That's truly it. I'm dog tired from my work out. Night!

Today's Reading: Psalm 105:1-12 (I haven't done it yet. About to. I just started a daily quite time. It's from my *sniff sniff* former highschool church group. I shall cherish this baby! Haha)

Night guys 

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